Friday, 27 March 2015

Tujhse Naraaz Nahi Hai Zindagi - Chapter One

ETF ek case ko solve karti hai…Jis ladke ka murder hua tha usne ek ladki ka rape kia tha aur apni behan ka badla lene k liye ladki k bhai se uss ladke ko marr dia…..pr MLA ka beta hone ki wajeh se wo case ETF k pass aaya aur ETF ki wajeh se ladki k rape ki baat sabke saamne aa gyi…Ladki ne ye baat apni family k alwa kisi ko nhi batai thi….but the wrost part of the case ladki k mangetar ko jab ye pta chala k ladki ka rape hua tha to usne ladki se apni sagai tod di….Ladki ne apne mangetar se bahut minnate ki unki shadi love marriage thi pr ladka nhi mana….
Sakshi : Isme iska kya kasoor hai…..aur tum to uss se pyar krte ho naa….uss se shadi krne k liye tumne apni family se jhagda kia….ab kya ho gya tumhare pyar ko
Boy : Pyar krta tha….pr ab nhi karta….main aisi ladki se shadi nhi kr skta….jiska rape hua ho
Liza : pr isme iski kya galti hai……isne ya kabhi koi ladki nhi chahti k uska rape ho….
Boy : Mujhe nhi pta k galti kiski hai…pr main apna faisla suna chuka hu….
Sam in anger to Boy : damn it! Jab ise tumhare sath ki sabse zyda zarurat hai tab tu sath chodne ki baat kr rhe ho….Pyar ka matlab hota hai har haal me sath dena……muskilo me muh chupana nhi hota
Boy : main aapse puchta hu k kya aap aisi ladki se shadi karenge jiska rape hua ho??? Kehne ki baatein hoti hai sir koi nhi krta aisi ladki se shadi
Sam in anger : Yes I will do if I love her. Pyar bina sharto ka hota hai….jis pyar me sharte hoti hai wo pyar nhi sauda hota hai….
Itna keh kr sam wahaan se chala jata hai…..wo ladka bhi uss ladki k ghar se nikal jata hai…wo ladki apne ghar me khub roti hai…Baki team bhi wahaan se chali jati hai….
In ETF Office
Samjun commissioner office gye huye the baki team coffee pr case discuss kr rhi hai
Shree : Yar sch me aaj case solve krke koi khushi nhi huyi….Iss se to ye case hamare pass aata hi nhi to hi achcha tha
Liza : Haan mujhe sabse zyda Laxmi k liye bura lag rha hai…iss sab me uski koi galti nhi thi…uske sath itna kuch ho gya wo kisi ko kuch keh hi nhi pai…..apni family ko bataya to bhai nikal pada badala lene k liye. Agar wo MLA ka beta nhi hota jiska murder hua to hume ye case milta hi nhi aur jis tarah se Laxmi k bhai ne  plan karke uss MLA k bête ka murder kia tha to muskil tha k local police ye case solve kr pati….
Aisha : guys case solve krna hamara kam hai…..aur govt hume issi kam ki salary deti hai
Sakshi : waise guys sameer ne laxmi k mangetar ko kya solid jawab dia…manana padega…
Aisha : sab kehne ki baatein hoti hai….agar laxmi k mangetar ki jagah rathore sir bhi hote naa to wo bhi yahi karte….
Everyone shocked by aisha reactions….
Chotu : tu to hamesha rathore sir ko har baat pr support krti hai aaj kya hua
Aisha : har baat pr nhi…..jo baat sahi hoti hai sirf ussi pr…..aur aksar rathore sahi baat hi bolte hai…pr aaj unhone laxmi k mangetar ko baat sunane k liye kuch zyda hi bol dia….Unka kehne me kya jata hai paise thodi lagte hai pr agar real life me rathore sir ya koi aur bhi aisi situation me padega to wo wahi karega to Laxmi k mangetar ne kia…koi itna mahaan nhi hota hai…..sab kehne ki baatein hoti hai….
Liza : aisha kuch to gadbad hai….tum rathore sir ki baat se agree nhi kr rhi……wo kabhi bina soche samjhe koi baat nhi bolte….
Sakshi : agree with liza….sameer ne kaha hai to he mean it…..
Shree : girls kam pr chalo…Rathore sir aur arjun sir aa rhe hai……
Girls piche mud kr dekhti hai…aur apne apne work station pr chali jati hai…..
Case was over….time passes….iss case k bare me team me fir kabhi koi baat nhi hoti….day passes…Aisha hamesha ki tarah sameer ko support krti hai……days passed….
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After one year….sameer aur aisha ka rishta dosti se kahin zyda hai….. Sameer had feelings for aisha
Samjun at Beach House   
Arjun : Sam meri taraf se sara kaam pura hai…ab jo karna hai tujhe hi karna hai
Sam : Arjun are you sure???? Ye sab thik rahega ???(Arjun glare sam continues) I mean tune jo intzam kiye hai achche kiye hai…but Aisha meri team mate bi hai…ye kuch zyda filmy nhi ho jayega…aaj kal kaun karta  hai ye sab aur waise bhi main ETF chief hu mujhe ye sab suit nhi karega….
Arjun : sam tu fattu ka fattu hi rahega….dekh maine sari prepration kr di hai pura romantic mahol bana dia hai tere liye ….but aisha ko purpose to tujhe hi karna padega….use beach house pr bula dia hai….uske sath time spend kar…..candle light dinner karo, use purpose karo…..aur I know wo haan hi karegi…uske baad masa babasa ko phone krke khabar do k unki bahu ne haan kar di hai…….mujhe aur kuch nhi sun na hai tu ab piche nhi hat sakta sam….tujhe ye sab aaj hi krna hoga…..
Sam : main piche nhi hat rha hu…mujhe ye sab kuch zyda filmy lag rha hai…aisa lag rha hai jaise main kisi romantic film k shoot pr aa gya hu…aur iss scene me hero heroine ko purpose krne wala hai
Arjun : exactly….mere hero…tujhe aaj raat ko aisha ko purpose karna hai…..tujhe kya bolna hai wo to pta hai ya wo bhi main btau….
Sam : teri help leke to main pachta rha hu….filmy set up….aisa kaun karta hai…Mujhe pta hai mujhe kya kehna hai…teri help li to tu kisi hindi films ki romantic lines pakda dega…..
Arjun : oh hello…Main tujhe push nhi karta to tujhe ye admit karne me k tu aisha se pyar krta hai sari zindagi nikal deta….Sir se Sameer pr to pahuch gya hai ab sameer se Sam pr bhi aa ja mere bhai….aur that good…thode kaam insan ko khud bhi kar lene  chahiye…I hope tu aisha k saamne kuch bhule nhi
Sam : aur agar aisha nhi aayi to????
Arjun : sam tu aaj kisi bhi halat me bach nhi skta….sakshi ne aisha ko bola hai k aaj uska birthday hai..aur wo party de rhi hai….to aisha sakshi ko mana nhi krti isliye kuch bhi ho jaye aisha aaj zarur aayegi……..aur agar tune aaj kuch bhi gadbad ki to main masa babasa ko lekar direct aisha k ghar pahuch jaunga…..ab samjhe ya samjhau
Sam : samjh gya mere bhai……agar agya ho to main meri taiyari kr lu….fir kahega k mere bas ki kuch nhi hai…..
Both smiles….
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In night….Aisha beach house k garden me aati hai…use ajeeb lagta hai k garden me koi nhi hai..jis whqt aisha enter hoti hai sam ki back uski taraf hoti hai…sam uss whqt samandar ko dekh rha tha…aisha sakshi ko awaz lagati hai
Aisha : sakshi??? Sakshi ????
Aisha ki awaz sun kr sam aisha ko palat kr dekhta hai…..sameer 3 piece suit me hai…aur aisha red saree me…..ek baar to dono ek dusre ko dekhte reh jate hai……..
Aisha : sameer??? Aap??????lagta hai meri tarah aap bhi kuch zyda jaldi aa gye hai…..koi bhi abhi tak nhi aaya hai….
Sam : koi aayega bhi nhi….
Aisha confusingly : matlab????? Sakshi ne kaha tha k aaj uska birthday hai aur wo yahaan party de rhi hai
Sam : apne aas pass dekho aisha tum sach me lagta hai ye decoration kisi birthday party k liye hai??? Ya fir tumhara aur mera akela hona ye ittefaq hai……
Aisha aas pass dekhti hai….wo realize krti hai k sameer jo bhi keh rha hai thik hai….pura maholl kisi romantic film k set se kam nhi hai……everything is just perfect for a date…Now she realized k aage kya hone wala hai…..
Sam : I hope tum samjh hi gyi k ye sab tumhare liye hai….aur hum dono yahaan akele kyun hai….pr fir bhi mera kehna zaruri hai…..isliye…..cut by aisha
Aisha : pr mujhe aapse bahut zaruri baat krni hai….in sabse bhi zyda zaruri….(tension in voice..)
Sam worrying in voice : kya baat hai aisha….tum achanak se itni pareshan kyun ho gyi…..
Aisha : sameer aap mere sath aaiye…please…..
aisha sameer ko ek chair pr bithati hai….aur thodi derr chup rehne k baad
Aisha : sameer yaad hai ek case k dauran aapne kaha tha k agar aap kisi aisi ladki se pyar krte honge jo rape victim rahi hogi….to aap uss se shadi karenge…
Sam confusingly : Haan kahaa tha….
Aisha : syad aapne uss whqt bhavnao me beh kr ye sab kaha tha
Sam : aisha ye tum bhi janti ho k main kbhi bina soche samjhe kuch nhi kehta….aur achanak se uss case ka jikr???? Meri kuch samjh me nhi aa rha……
Aisha sam k saamne wali chair se uth kr jati hai…..ab aisha ki back hai sam k saamne….
Aisha : sameer baat purani hai…pr sach hai…..I am a date rape victim…….
Sam shockingly : what?????????
Aisha : sameer meri baat abhi khatam nhi huyi hai…..Main aur Nilesh kafi time se ek dusre ko date kr rhe the…..Jab meri IPS ki training k liye letter aaya to maine Nilesh ko bataya…use mera police force join krna psnd nhi tha…pr maine kabhi bhi sapne me nhi socha tha wo mujhe rokne k liye kuch aisa krega…usne mujhse kaha k mere training me jaane se pehle wo mera sath kuch whqt akele me bitana chahta hai…..Mujhe uss pr yakin tha….to main maan gyi..hum uske farm house pr gye…..usne mere drink me drugs mila diye…..wo janta tha k aise wo kuch nhi kar payega…..iske baad main kuch nhi kar payi….agli subah jab drugs ka asar kam hua to sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha…..maine fir bhi himmat nhi hari..maine nilesh ko warning di k main uski complaint police me karungi….kyunki main IPS ki training join krne wali thi to iss baat se wo darr gya aur mujhe rokne k liye mere piche piche hi aa rha tha….k ek truck ne use uda dia….aur uski on the spot maut ho gyi….main kaise bhi karke ghar pahuchi….aur jab maine ye sab kuch apni family ko bataya to unhone mujhe support krne ki jagah ghar se nikal jaane ko kaha unke hisab se galti meri thi isliye mere sath ye sab kuch hua….unke liye main ussi whqt marr gyi thi……Mere pass koi aur option bhi nhi tha Nilesh mar chuka tha….to police complaint ka koi fyda nhi tha…aur iss bare me kisi ko kuch pta bhi nhi tha….maine IPS ki training join kr li….apne hisse ka gussa aur frustration main sab training me hi nikal leti thi…..Maine uske baad kabhi mud kr apni family ko nhi dekha….aur naa hi unhone mujhe kabhi dhundne ki koshish ki k main kahaan gyi….
Aisha bolte bolte ruk jati hai………but sameer ko samjh nhi aa rha k wo kaise react kare..sameer ko kuch naa bolte dekh
Aisha : sameer its okay….kuch kehne ki zarurat nhi hai……Feelings hai up down ho jati hai….Agar tumne kisi ko bataya hai k tum aisa kuch krne wale ho to keh dena k maine mana kar dia….meri zindagi me koi aur hai…..aur agar mera saamne aana ab tumhe takleef dena to tum mera transfer kr skte ho….even kal main khud hi iski official request bhej dungi….
Sam did not reply…..
Aisha : main chalti hu……sameer…I am sorry mujhe nhi pta tha k tumne aisa kuch plan kia hai to main tumhe ye sab pehle bta deti……

Aisha wahaan se bina aur kuch kahe chali jati…..sameer ye sab sun kr bahut zyda shocked hai use samjh nhi aa rha k wo kya react kare aur kaise react kare……

20 comments:

  1. nice one... true aksar josh main jo bolte hai aur reality main jo hota hai usme fark nazar aa sakta hai...

    let's see ab sam kya karega... it's good ki sam ne jhat seh haan nahi boli.. he needs to be careful with his words and emotions... it's good u showed that he took some time to process what's being said.

    continue soon!

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    1. yup gyan dena asan hota hai jab insan k sar pr padti hai to uski bolti band ho jati hai......
      ofcourse sam kya kisi ko bhi situation samjhne ka time to chahiye hi tha....

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  2. Awesome start DI
    loved it
    case ki start read karte hi andaza laga liya tha ki kuch aisa hi hoga..
    hmm.. so Aisha is a rape victim..
    Sam had said he'd support her if he loves her..
    well now the truth is out..
    let's see what's Sam's decision!
    eagerly waiting for next part
    do continu soon
    thanks for pm

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    1. yup starting se guess krna asan tha....case rakha hi reference k liye tha...aisha is date rape victim...koi use zabardasti nhi le gya tha...wo nilesh pr trust krke gyi thi.....
      thanks for the comment

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  3. Awesome update....

    Feeling bad for Laxmi....:(:(
    That's true....aaj kal aisa pyaar nahi hota jahan Laxmi jaisi ladki ke saath koi shaadi kar le...:(:(
    Everyone is shocked that Aisha is not agreeing with Sameer....:P:P
    Waah....Arjun ne date ki saaru preparation ki hai....:-o :-o
    Iss hisab se toh date pe bhi Arjun ko hi jana chahiye....:P:P
    Sach mein Sameer fattu hai aur fattu hi rahega....:P:P
    Yeh toh silent proposal hi gaya...:-o :P
    Feeling really bad for Aisha...:(:(
    And her family....x-( x-(
    That Nilesh....x-( x-(
    Usko itni asan maut kyu mili....x-( x-(

    Continue soon....Thanks for PM....

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    1. aaj kal kya bahut rare hi log hote hai jo laxmi jaise rape victim ko insan samjhe...rape hone k baad log use ajeeb nazaro se dekhte hai jaise ussi ki galti thi....
      lol...arjun agar aisha k sath date pe jayega to rathore uska khun nhi kar dega...
      yup silent proposal k sath sath silent naah bhi ho gyi.....
      aisa hi hota hai mostly rape victim k sath...bahar wale to chodo ghar wale sath nhi dete
      isliye mostly rape cases me victim suicide kr lete hai

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  4. Superb story *claps*
    Very intriguing BT I liked it ...
    Ek rape victim hona bahot mushkil hota n jaisa samaaj jaisa unse behave karti hai usse victim khud se nafrat karne lagte hai ye jaante hue bhi ki unki galti nhi h n so it was obvious on Aisha's part to behave in this way ek rape victim se shadi karna is not easy at all bt sameer se zada understandingn brave ayesha ko koi mil bhi nhi Sakta Jo samaaj se bhi lad sake uske liye.. Arjun Sam convoy was mast...
    Very nicely written part - Annu :*

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    1. ek comment ek bar me samjh aata hai do do bar post kr dia...
      agreed mostly yahi hota hai...khud se nafrat k chalte rape victim suicide krne pr majbur ho jate hai.....
      rape victim se log baat nhi krna chahte...shadi to bahut dur ki baat hai...sam bhi to chup rha jab use pta chala k aisha date rape victim hai

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  6. Awesome start dushman...

    yep its the truth of our society...we always feel relieved and happy to see others weaker and more vulnerable than us...and reasons like rape sells like hot cakes...
    and its sad that even as much we try...we cant change the mentality which out society brings in us...no one is gonna spare mocking at a rape victim...

    nways...the story was a good one...from the beginning when Aisha spoke for Lakhmi i knew it would come up with her too...

    finally it did and the news shocked out hero...and i am glad he didnt speak a word...
    its obvious but Aisha misunderstood...
    waiting to read his reaction...and then the reply from Aisha..
    Continue soon dushman...

    thanks for pm..

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    1. agreed..society k hisab se rape k liye rapist ko chod kr sab zimedar hote hai victim k kapde se lekar raat ko bahar ghumne tak, phone pr baat krne ki wajeh bhi bta di jati hai rape ki....this is really ridiculous....victim ko to ghar wale ghar se bahar nikal dete hai...but rapist apne ghar me aaram se rehta hai ...jaise usne kuch galat kiya hi nhi hai....

      yup itna bada jhatka sehne k liye sam ko bhi thoda sa whqt to chahiye hi hoga....but aisha ki tarah se socha jaye to wo thik soch rhi hai...sam ka kuch nhi bolna uske hisab se sam k liye naa hi hai

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  7. Awesome start
    Loved it
    Poor Lakshmi
    But it's the truth of our society
    victim ko hi blame kiya jata hai even if she is at no fault
    Aisha not agreeing with Sam
    Issi se andaza ho gaya that ki aisa kuch honewala hai
    So Aisha is a rape victim
    Sam shocked to know the truth
    But it's obvious
    After all he needs time to deal with it
    But Aisha misunderstood it
    Let's see aage kya hota hai
    Waiting for the next part
    Continue soon

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    1. glad you like the part dear....thanks for comment
      agreed...yahi sach hai...log tv pr to mahan logo ko dekhna psnd karte hai
      pr real life me gatiya soch rakhte hai...usi ka natija hai k adhe se zyda rape case file hi nhi hote....

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  8. really good story. aisha is right in a way. men make promises but very easily break those promises also. it is easy for them. they are men. but i also disagree as there are some men who make promises and mean them. they will accept marrying a girl if they they love that girl even though she is a rape victim. i hope sameer is the one who honours his words.

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    1. yup agreed...k aisa bhi nhi hai sabhi ka nazariya ek sa ho...kuch log hote hai jo insan ko insan samjhte hai chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..maine you tube pr ek video dekha tha jisme 75% se zyda logo ne kaha tha k wo rape victim se shadi nhi karenge...but kuch the jinhone proudly kaha k iss se mujhe kya fark padega....

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  9. OMG
    True sabko lecture dena bohot asan hota hai but jispe guzarti hai sirf wohi samajh sakta hai...

    Aj bhi agar koi lardki ghar aa kar apne parents se shikayat kare ke school ya college se wapsi ek ladke ne misbehave kia toh bajaye us ladke ki compleat karne ke parents kehte hain dhiyaan mat do, ya apna rout change karlo....

    Update soon... I wanna see Sameer sirf lecture hi de sakta hai ya kuch kar bhi sakta hai

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    1. yeah agreed..lecture dene me...aur real life me sath dene me zameen asman ka fark hota hai....aisa hi hota hai...ladki ko hi kahaa jata hai k wo lift deti hogi wrna koi kyun uske piche padega....yahi soch to kharab hai society ki....

      dear already second part updated hai....check it
      hope you like second part too

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