ETF ek case ko solve karti hai…Jis ladke ka murder hua tha
usne ek ladki ka rape kia tha aur apni behan ka badla lene k liye ladki k bhai
se uss ladke ko marr dia…..pr MLA ka beta hone ki wajeh se wo case ETF k pass
aaya aur ETF ki wajeh se ladki k rape ki baat sabke saamne aa gyi…Ladki ne ye
baat apni family k alwa kisi ko nhi batai thi….but the wrost part of the case
ladki k mangetar ko jab ye pta chala k ladki ka rape hua tha to usne ladki se
apni sagai tod di….Ladki ne apne mangetar se bahut minnate ki unki shadi love
marriage thi pr ladka nhi mana….
Sakshi : Isme iska kya kasoor hai…..aur tum to uss se pyar
krte ho naa….uss se shadi krne k liye tumne apni family se jhagda kia….ab kya
ho gya tumhare pyar ko
Boy : Pyar krta tha….pr ab nhi karta….main aisi ladki se
shadi nhi kr skta….jiska rape hua ho
Liza : pr isme iski kya galti hai……isne ya kabhi koi ladki
nhi chahti k uska rape ho….
Boy : Mujhe nhi pta k galti kiski hai…pr main apna faisla
suna chuka hu….
Sam in anger to Boy : damn it! Jab ise tumhare sath ki sabse
zyda zarurat hai tab tu sath chodne ki baat kr rhe ho….Pyar ka matlab hota hai
har haal me sath dena……muskilo me muh chupana nhi hota
Boy : main aapse puchta hu k kya aap aisi ladki se shadi
karenge jiska rape hua ho??? Kehne ki baatein hoti hai sir koi nhi krta aisi
ladki se shadi
Sam in anger : Yes I will do if I love her. Pyar bina sharto
ka hota hai….jis pyar me sharte hoti hai wo pyar nhi sauda hota hai….
Itna keh kr sam wahaan se chala jata hai…..wo ladka bhi uss
ladki k ghar se nikal jata hai…wo ladki apne ghar me khub roti hai…Baki team
bhi wahaan se chali jati hai….
In ETF Office
Samjun commissioner office gye huye the baki team coffee pr
case discuss kr rhi hai
Shree : Yar sch me aaj case solve krke koi khushi nhi
huyi….Iss se to ye case hamare pass aata hi nhi to hi achcha tha
Liza : Haan mujhe sabse zyda Laxmi k liye bura lag rha
hai…iss sab me uski koi galti nhi thi…uske sath itna kuch ho gya wo kisi ko
kuch keh hi nhi pai…..apni family ko bataya to bhai nikal pada badala lene k
liye. Agar wo MLA ka beta nhi hota jiska murder hua to hume ye case milta hi
nhi aur jis tarah se Laxmi k bhai ne plan karke uss MLA k bête ka murder kia tha to
muskil tha k local police ye case solve kr pati….
Aisha : guys case solve krna hamara kam hai…..aur govt hume
issi kam ki salary deti hai
Sakshi : waise guys sameer ne laxmi k mangetar ko kya solid
jawab dia…manana padega…
Aisha : sab kehne ki baatein hoti hai….agar laxmi k mangetar
ki jagah rathore sir bhi hote naa to wo bhi yahi karte….
Everyone shocked by aisha reactions….
Chotu : tu to hamesha rathore sir ko har baat pr support
krti hai aaj kya hua
Aisha : har baat pr nhi…..jo baat sahi hoti hai sirf ussi
pr…..aur aksar rathore sahi baat hi bolte hai…pr aaj unhone laxmi k mangetar ko
baat sunane k liye kuch zyda hi bol dia….Unka kehne me kya jata hai paise thodi
lagte hai pr agar real life me rathore sir ya koi aur bhi aisi situation me
padega to wo wahi karega to Laxmi k mangetar ne kia…koi itna mahaan nhi hota
hai…..sab kehne ki baatein hoti hai….
Liza : aisha kuch to gadbad hai….tum rathore sir ki baat se
agree nhi kr rhi……wo kabhi bina soche samjhe koi baat nhi bolte….
Sakshi : agree with liza….sameer ne kaha hai to he mean
it…..
Shree : girls kam pr chalo…Rathore sir aur arjun sir aa rhe
hai……
Girls piche mud kr dekhti hai…aur apne apne work station pr
chali jati hai…..
Case was over….time passes….iss case k bare me team me fir
kabhi koi baat nhi hoti….day passes…Aisha hamesha ki tarah sameer ko support
krti hai……days passed….
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After one year….sameer aur aisha ka rishta dosti se kahin
zyda hai….. Sameer had feelings for aisha
Samjun at Beach House
Arjun : Sam meri taraf se sara kaam pura hai…ab jo karna hai
tujhe hi karna hai
Sam : Arjun are you sure???? Ye sab thik rahega ???(Arjun
glare sam continues) I mean tune jo intzam kiye hai achche kiye hai…but Aisha
meri team mate bi hai…ye kuch zyda filmy nhi ho jayega…aaj kal kaun karta hai ye sab aur waise bhi main ETF chief hu
mujhe ye sab suit nhi karega….
Arjun : sam tu fattu ka fattu hi rahega….dekh maine sari
prepration kr di hai pura romantic mahol bana dia hai tere liye ….but aisha ko
purpose to tujhe hi karna padega….use beach house pr bula dia hai….uske sath
time spend kar…..candle light dinner karo, use purpose karo…..aur I know wo
haan hi karegi…uske baad masa babasa ko phone krke khabar do k unki bahu ne
haan kar di hai…….mujhe aur kuch nhi sun na hai tu ab piche nhi hat sakta sam….tujhe
ye sab aaj hi krna hoga…..
Sam : main piche nhi hat rha hu…mujhe ye sab kuch zyda filmy
lag rha hai…aisa lag rha hai jaise main kisi romantic film k shoot pr aa gya hu…aur
iss scene me hero heroine ko purpose krne wala hai
Arjun : exactly….mere hero…tujhe aaj raat ko aisha ko
purpose karna hai…..tujhe kya bolna hai wo to pta hai ya wo bhi main btau….
Sam : teri help leke to main pachta rha hu….filmy set up….aisa
kaun karta hai…Mujhe pta hai mujhe kya kehna hai…teri help li to tu kisi hindi
films ki romantic lines pakda dega…..
Arjun : oh hello…Main tujhe push nhi karta to tujhe ye admit
karne me k tu aisha se pyar krta hai sari zindagi nikal deta….Sir se Sameer pr
to pahuch gya hai ab sameer se Sam pr bhi aa ja mere bhai….aur that good…thode
kaam insan ko khud bhi kar lene chahiye…I
hope tu aisha k saamne kuch bhule nhi
Sam : aur agar aisha nhi aayi to????
Arjun : sam tu aaj kisi bhi halat me bach nhi skta….sakshi
ne aisha ko bola hai k aaj uska birthday hai..aur wo party de rhi hai….to aisha
sakshi ko mana nhi krti isliye kuch bhi ho jaye aisha aaj zarur aayegi……..aur
agar tune aaj kuch bhi gadbad ki to main masa babasa ko lekar direct aisha k
ghar pahuch jaunga…..ab samjhe ya samjhau
Sam : samjh gya mere bhai……agar agya ho to main meri taiyari
kr lu….fir kahega k mere bas ki kuch nhi hai…..
Both smiles….
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In night….Aisha beach house
k garden me aati hai…use ajeeb lagta hai k garden me koi nhi hai..jis whqt
aisha enter hoti hai sam ki back uski taraf hoti hai…sam uss whqt samandar ko
dekh rha tha…aisha sakshi ko awaz lagati hai
Aisha : sakshi??? Sakshi
????
Aisha ki awaz sun kr sam
aisha ko palat kr dekhta hai…..sameer 3 piece suit me hai…aur aisha red saree
me…..ek baar to dono ek dusre ko dekhte reh jate hai……..
Aisha : sameer??? Aap??????lagta
hai meri tarah aap bhi kuch zyda jaldi aa gye hai…..koi bhi abhi tak nhi aaya
hai….
Sam : koi aayega bhi nhi….
Aisha confusingly :
matlab????? Sakshi ne kaha tha k aaj uska birthday hai aur wo yahaan party de
rhi hai
Sam : apne aas pass dekho
aisha tum sach me lagta hai ye decoration kisi birthday party k liye hai??? Ya
fir tumhara aur mera akela hona ye ittefaq hai……
Aisha aas pass dekhti hai….wo
realize krti hai k sameer jo bhi keh rha hai thik hai….pura maholl kisi
romantic film k set se kam nhi hai……everything is just perfect for a date…Now
she realized k aage kya hone wala hai…..
Sam : I hope tum samjh hi
gyi k ye sab tumhare liye hai….aur hum dono yahaan akele kyun hai….pr fir bhi mera
kehna zaruri hai…..isliye…..cut by aisha
Aisha : pr mujhe aapse bahut
zaruri baat krni hai….in sabse bhi zyda zaruri….(tension in voice..)
Sam worrying in voice : kya
baat hai aisha….tum achanak se itni pareshan kyun ho gyi…..
Aisha : sameer aap mere sath
aaiye…please…..
aisha sameer ko ek chair pr
bithati hai….aur thodi derr chup rehne k baad
Aisha : sameer yaad hai ek
case k dauran aapne kaha tha k agar aap kisi aisi ladki se pyar krte honge jo
rape victim rahi hogi….to aap uss se shadi karenge…
Sam confusingly : Haan kahaa
tha….
Aisha : syad aapne uss whqt
bhavnao me beh kr ye sab kaha tha
Sam : aisha ye tum bhi janti
ho k main kbhi bina soche samjhe kuch nhi kehta….aur achanak se uss case ka
jikr???? Meri kuch samjh me nhi aa rha……
Aisha sam k saamne wali
chair se uth kr jati hai…..ab aisha ki back hai sam k saamne….
Aisha : sameer baat purani
hai…pr sach hai…..I am a date rape victim…….
Sam shockingly :
what?????????
Aisha : sameer meri baat
abhi khatam nhi huyi hai…..Main aur Nilesh kafi time se ek dusre ko date kr rhe
the…..Jab meri IPS ki training k liye letter aaya to maine Nilesh ko bataya…use
mera police force join krna psnd nhi tha…pr maine kabhi bhi sapne me nhi socha tha
wo mujhe rokne k liye kuch aisa krega…usne mujhse kaha k mere training me jaane
se pehle wo mera sath kuch whqt akele me bitana chahta hai…..Mujhe uss pr yakin
tha….to main maan gyi..hum uske farm house pr gye…..usne mere drink me drugs
mila diye…..wo janta tha k aise wo kuch nhi kar payega…..iske baad main kuch
nhi kar payi….agli subah jab drugs ka asar kam hua to sab kuch khatam ho chuka
tha…..maine fir bhi himmat nhi hari..maine nilesh ko warning di k main uski
complaint police me karungi….kyunki main IPS ki training join krne wali thi to
iss baat se wo darr gya aur mujhe rokne k liye mere piche piche hi aa rha tha….k
ek truck ne use uda dia….aur uski on the spot maut ho gyi….main kaise bhi karke
ghar pahuchi….aur jab maine ye sab kuch apni family ko bataya to unhone mujhe support
krne ki jagah ghar se nikal jaane ko kaha unke hisab se galti meri thi isliye
mere sath ye sab kuch hua….unke liye main ussi whqt marr gyi thi……Mere pass koi
aur option bhi nhi tha Nilesh mar chuka tha….to police complaint ka koi fyda
nhi tha…aur iss bare me kisi ko kuch pta bhi nhi tha….maine IPS ki training
join kr li….apne hisse ka gussa aur frustration main sab training me hi nikal
leti thi…..Maine uske baad kabhi mud kr apni family ko nhi dekha….aur naa hi
unhone mujhe kabhi dhundne ki koshish ki k main kahaan gyi….
Aisha bolte bolte ruk jati
hai………but sameer ko samjh nhi aa rha k wo kaise react kare..sameer ko kuch naa
bolte dekh
Aisha : sameer its okay….kuch
kehne ki zarurat nhi hai……Feelings hai up down ho jati hai….Agar tumne kisi ko
bataya hai k tum aisa kuch krne wale ho to keh dena k maine mana kar dia….meri
zindagi me koi aur hai…..aur agar mera saamne aana ab tumhe takleef dena to tum
mera transfer kr skte ho….even kal main khud hi iski official request bhej
dungi….
Sam did not reply…..
Aisha : main chalti hu……sameer…I
am sorry mujhe nhi pta tha k tumne aisa kuch plan kia hai to main tumhe ye sab
pehle bta deti……
Aisha wahaan se bina aur
kuch kahe chali jati…..sameer ye sab sun kr bahut zyda shocked hai use samjh
nhi aa rha k wo kya react kare aur kaise react kare……
nice one... true aksar josh main jo bolte hai aur reality main jo hota hai usme fark nazar aa sakta hai...
ReplyDeletelet's see ab sam kya karega... it's good ki sam ne jhat seh haan nahi boli.. he needs to be careful with his words and emotions... it's good u showed that he took some time to process what's being said.
continue soon!
yup gyan dena asan hota hai jab insan k sar pr padti hai to uski bolti band ho jati hai......
Deleteofcourse sam kya kisi ko bhi situation samjhne ka time to chahiye hi tha....
Awesome start DI
ReplyDeleteloved it
case ki start read karte hi andaza laga liya tha ki kuch aisa hi hoga..
hmm.. so Aisha is a rape victim..
Sam had said he'd support her if he loves her..
well now the truth is out..
let's see what's Sam's decision!
eagerly waiting for next part
do continu soon
thanks for pm
yup starting se guess krna asan tha....case rakha hi reference k liye tha...aisha is date rape victim...koi use zabardasti nhi le gya tha...wo nilesh pr trust krke gyi thi.....
Deletethanks for the comment
Awesome update....
ReplyDeleteFeeling bad for Laxmi....:(:(
That's true....aaj kal aisa pyaar nahi hota jahan Laxmi jaisi ladki ke saath koi shaadi kar le...:(:(
Everyone is shocked that Aisha is not agreeing with Sameer....:P:P
Waah....Arjun ne date ki saaru preparation ki hai....:-o :-o
Iss hisab se toh date pe bhi Arjun ko hi jana chahiye....:P:P
Sach mein Sameer fattu hai aur fattu hi rahega....:P:P
Yeh toh silent proposal hi gaya...:-o :P
Feeling really bad for Aisha...:(:(
And her family....x-( x-(
That Nilesh....x-( x-(
Usko itni asan maut kyu mili....x-( x-(
Continue soon....Thanks for PM....
aaj kal kya bahut rare hi log hote hai jo laxmi jaise rape victim ko insan samjhe...rape hone k baad log use ajeeb nazaro se dekhte hai jaise ussi ki galti thi....
Deletelol...arjun agar aisha k sath date pe jayega to rathore uska khun nhi kar dega...
yup silent proposal k sath sath silent naah bhi ho gyi.....
aisa hi hota hai mostly rape victim k sath...bahar wale to chodo ghar wale sath nhi dete
isliye mostly rape cases me victim suicide kr lete hai
Superb story *claps*
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing BT I liked it ...
Ek rape victim hona bahot mushkil hota n jaisa samaaj jaisa unse behave karti hai usse victim khud se nafrat karne lagte hai ye jaante hue bhi ki unki galti nhi h n so it was obvious on Aisha's part to behave in this way ek rape victim se shadi karna is not easy at all bt sameer se zada understandingn brave ayesha ko koi mil bhi nhi Sakta Jo samaaj se bhi lad sake uske liye.. Arjun Sam convoy was mast...
Very nicely written part - Annu :*
ek comment ek bar me samjh aata hai do do bar post kr dia...
Deleteagreed mostly yahi hota hai...khud se nafrat k chalte rape victim suicide krne pr majbur ho jate hai.....
rape victim se log baat nhi krna chahte...shadi to bahut dur ki baat hai...sam bhi to chup rha jab use pta chala k aisha date rape victim hai
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ReplyDeleteSorry mataji :P
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Delete:P :D
DeleteAwesome start dushman...
ReplyDeleteyep its the truth of our society...we always feel relieved and happy to see others weaker and more vulnerable than us...and reasons like rape sells like hot cakes...
and its sad that even as much we try...we cant change the mentality which out society brings in us...no one is gonna spare mocking at a rape victim...
nways...the story was a good one...from the beginning when Aisha spoke for Lakhmi i knew it would come up with her too...
finally it did and the news shocked out hero...and i am glad he didnt speak a word...
its obvious but Aisha misunderstood...
waiting to read his reaction...and then the reply from Aisha..
Continue soon dushman...
thanks for pm..
agreed..society k hisab se rape k liye rapist ko chod kr sab zimedar hote hai victim k kapde se lekar raat ko bahar ghumne tak, phone pr baat krne ki wajeh bhi bta di jati hai rape ki....this is really ridiculous....victim ko to ghar wale ghar se bahar nikal dete hai...but rapist apne ghar me aaram se rehta hai ...jaise usne kuch galat kiya hi nhi hai....
Deleteyup itna bada jhatka sehne k liye sam ko bhi thoda sa whqt to chahiye hi hoga....but aisha ki tarah se socha jaye to wo thik soch rhi hai...sam ka kuch nhi bolna uske hisab se sam k liye naa hi hai
Awesome start
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Poor Lakshmi
But it's the truth of our society
victim ko hi blame kiya jata hai even if she is at no fault
Aisha not agreeing with Sam
Issi se andaza ho gaya that ki aisa kuch honewala hai
So Aisha is a rape victim
Sam shocked to know the truth
But it's obvious
After all he needs time to deal with it
But Aisha misunderstood it
Let's see aage kya hota hai
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
glad you like the part dear....thanks for comment
Deleteagreed...yahi sach hai...log tv pr to mahan logo ko dekhna psnd karte hai
pr real life me gatiya soch rakhte hai...usi ka natija hai k adhe se zyda rape case file hi nhi hote....
really good story. aisha is right in a way. men make promises but very easily break those promises also. it is easy for them. they are men. but i also disagree as there are some men who make promises and mean them. they will accept marrying a girl if they they love that girl even though she is a rape victim. i hope sameer is the one who honours his words.
ReplyDeleteyup agreed...k aisa bhi nhi hai sabhi ka nazariya ek sa ho...kuch log hote hai jo insan ko insan samjhte hai chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..maine you tube pr ek video dekha tha jisme 75% se zyda logo ne kaha tha k wo rape victim se shadi nhi karenge...but kuch the jinhone proudly kaha k iss se mujhe kya fark padega....
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ReplyDeleteTrue sabko lecture dena bohot asan hota hai but jispe guzarti hai sirf wohi samajh sakta hai...
Aj bhi agar koi lardki ghar aa kar apne parents se shikayat kare ke school ya college se wapsi ek ladke ne misbehave kia toh bajaye us ladke ki compleat karne ke parents kehte hain dhiyaan mat do, ya apna rout change karlo....
Update soon... I wanna see Sameer sirf lecture hi de sakta hai ya kuch kar bhi sakta hai
yeah agreed..lecture dene me...aur real life me sath dene me zameen asman ka fark hota hai....aisa hi hota hai...ladki ko hi kahaa jata hai k wo lift deti hogi wrna koi kyun uske piche padega....yahi soch to kharab hai society ki....
Deletedear already second part updated hai....check it
hope you like second part too